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3clipse
Gay for Richard Simmons


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#1
09-09-2008, 08:58 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jalvwVKeG34

Just my first, tell me what you think.


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copulatingduck
Following in Gordon's Footsteps


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#2
09-09-2008, 09:09 PM

A bit slow in the beginning, but definitely worth the ending. +1 Big Grin


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Fail Medic
Actually made of WIN
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#3
09-09-2008, 10:07 PM

In before Karth, resident Youtube Poop expert.  (lol j/k karth)

Like I said on the comments, needs more zaniness IMHO, but I do hope you make more.  May we look forward to future poops?
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MrGrey
GreyC Denton


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#4
09-09-2008, 10:10 PM

the beginning was the best part.... needs more Mr.Grey sound clips tho

Big Grin


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Dave
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#5
09-10-2008, 06:26 AM

fucking hate youtube poop.


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KarthXLR
Free of STD's ... lolwut?


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#6
09-10-2008, 08:47 AM

The ending made me laugh.

But as Fail said, could use a little more "zaniness". And if you can, maybe even try to make a flash poop.
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