I think a Pulitzer is in order.
Somebody broke all the formatting... >:O
(08-22-2009, 11:10 PM)jeff link Wrote:edit: also forgot to mention i spent like 3 hours editing his c+ english class writing
Color, not colour
Ditto for labor
(08-23-2009, 12:16 AM)Caffeine link Wrote:[quote author=jeff link=topic=3508.msg108243#msg108243 date=1251000647]
edit: also forgot to mention i spent like 3 hours editing his c+ english class writing
Color, not colour
Ditto for labor
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I assume Dave uses the Queen's English.
(08-23-2009, 12:21 AM)Coordinator Ruby link Wrote:[quote author=Caffeine link=topic=3508.msg108257#msg108257 date=1251004575]
[quote author=jeff link=topic=3508.msg108243#msg108243 date=1251000647]
edit: also forgot to mention i spent like 3 hours editing his c+ english class writing
Color, not colour
Ditto for labor
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I assume Dave uses
the Queen's proper English.
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(08-23-2009, 12:50 AM)HeK link Wrote:[quote author=Coordinator Ruby link=topic=3508.msg108258#msg108258 date=1251004878]
[quote author=Caffeine link=topic=3508.msg108257#msg108257 date=1251004575]
[quote author=jeff link=topic=3508.msg108243#msg108243 date=1251000647]
edit: also forgot to mention i spent like 3 hours editing his c+ english class writing
Color, not colour
Ditto for labor
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I assume Dave uses
the Queen's proper English.
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That being said, it was actually pretty damn funny. Keep up the good work MARMADUUUDE.
a warning, this is highly offensive to mutliple groups of people but its not like they could catch me so whatever.
Sigh. Such is the internet I suppose. Structurally, its a well written article. Topically, there's nothing to think about, or be interested in. It's literary bile.
Sorry, Dave. If the first article is supposed to give an insight into the person writing it, I fear you might have made the wrong impression.
heres an impression, i dislike fat people.
(08-23-2009, 03:42 PM)Kor link Wrote:Sigh. Such is the internet I suppose. Structurally, its a well written article. Topically, there's nothing to think about, or be interested in. It's literary bile.
Sorry, Dave. If the first article is supposed to give an insight into the person writing it, I fear you might have made the wrong impression.
It's supposed to be a funny post, not a mind blowing intellectual masterpiece
(08-23-2009, 03:42 PM)Kor link Wrote:Sigh. Such is the internet I suppose. Structurally, its a well written article. Topically, there's nothing to think about, or be interested in. It's literary bile.
Sorry, Dave. If the first article is supposed to give an insight into the person writing it, I fear you might have made the wrong impression.
Sigh. Such is the internet I suppose. Structurally, your ___
topical writing___Â is a well written statement. Topically, there's nothing to think about, or be interested in. It's literary bile.
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Name_. If the ___
topical writing___ is supposed to give an insight into the person writing it, I fear you might have made the wrong impression.
(08-23-2009, 03:50 PM)Scary Womanizing Pig Mask link Wrote:It's supposed to be a funny post, not a mind blowing intellectual masterpiece
(08-23-2009, 03:58 PM)Sponson link Wrote:Sigh. Such is the internet I suppose. Structurally, your ___topical writing___Â is a well written statement. Topically, there's nothing to think about, or be interested in. It's literary bile.
Sorry, __Insert_Name_. If the ___topical writing___ is supposed to give an insight into the person writing it, I fear you might have made the wrong impression.
My bad, didn't know this was just a cocksucking thread
I'll take my relatively light criticism and go. :
(08-23-2009, 04:17 PM)Kor link Wrote:[quote author=Scary Womanizing Pig Mask link=topic=3508.msg108364#msg108364 date=1251060633]
It's supposed to be a funny post, not a mind blowing intellectual masterpiece
(08-23-2009, 03:58 PM)Sponson link Wrote:Sigh. Such is the internet I suppose. Structurally, your ___topical writing___Â is a well written statement. Topically, there's nothing to think about, or be interested in. It's literary bile.
Sorry, __Insert_Name_. If the ___topical writing___ is supposed to give an insight into the person writing it, I fear you might have made the wrong impression.
My bad, didn't know this was just a cocksucking thread
I'll take my relatively light criticism and go. :
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Please, this is nothing compared to some of the ass kissing that's gone on. It was funny and involved making fun of fatties.
Obviously it was intended to be a very informative article, thank you for providing feedback so we can improve on future columns. I suppose a collective, "MAH B", from the Marmadude staff is in order.
noodz
I read it and I'm just itching to go in there and edit that thing six ways from sunday.
I mean fixing it up without taking too much out.
... I am reminded that I will soon be writing/editing essays again.
Srsly though I would love to have a crack at making it a bit more polished.
(08-23-2009, 06:15 PM)Luinbariel link Wrote:I read it and I'm just itching to go in there and edit that thing six ways from sunday.
I mean fixing it up without taking too much out.
... I am reminded that I will soon be writing/editing essays again.
Srsly though I would love to have a crack at making it a bit more polished.
Be my guest, I'm way too lazy to do it myself. I already spent 3 hours making it SOMEWHAT readable.
when i first submitted it half of it was written in ketchup i love my editors.